2013년 1월 14일 월요일

Response Essay

 In TED talk,  a girl called Adora Svitak talked about adults and children. She said that adults should learn from children. She said that the children will grow up to be like the adults and even better. Well, I agree with her opinion that adults should respect children more. This is because of two reasons.

 The first reason is the creativity. Young children who's age is about seven have a lot of strange and interesting ideas. According to the speech, adults only think about the logic and the possibility, so they make things that are useful but not interesting. Children, however, have very interesting ideas. They dream about beautiful things in their imagination. She said that the glass museum in her hometown have events that make the children draw out what they would make with glass. She said that the museum got some very good ideas from that event. 

 The next reason is possibilities. Children didn't grow up yet and have a lot of time to learn and be mature. Adults have grown up and do not have the time to grow up again. Normal adults rarely turn into really famous people. Children have a lot of time to prepare to be a good person. For example, Steve Jobs became famous because he liked computers when when he was a child. 

These are the reasons why I think Adora Svitak is right. Adults should respect children.

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  1. Please be more careful about small, simple mistakes (spelling, capital letters, and grammar).

    In your first body paragraph you state that adults only use logical thinking. What about all the artists and writers that are adults? Did Mozart only use logic when composing? Are JK Rowling's Harry Potter novels full of logic or imagination?

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